Tuesday, 28 July 2015

Kensuke's Kingdom

Them sailing round the world is a good idea because: It would be fun,  they would get to see the world and there would be a lot of fresh air
It would be a bad idea because: They would get seasick,  they would run out of food (The world is very big) and there would be a lot of iceberg.
I think:  BAD IDEA. Too much danger of the whole plot happening
My Reflection
I was learning to look at the pros and cons of what happens in a story. I found this easy because we only read chapter 1. My next step is to put more detail into my writing.