Wednesday 29 July 2015
Tuesday 28 July 2015
Kensuke's Kingdom
Them sailing round the world is a good idea because: It would be fun, they would get to see the world and there would be a lot of fresh air
It would be a bad idea because: They would get seasick, they would run out of food (The world is very big) and there would be a lot of iceberg.
I think: BAD IDEA. Too much danger of the whole plot happening
It would be a bad idea because: They would get seasick, they would run out of food (The world is very big) and there would be a lot of iceberg.
I think: BAD IDEA. Too much danger of the whole plot happening
My Reflection
I was learning to look at the pros and cons of what happens in a story. I found this easy because we only read chapter 1. My next step is to put more detail into my writing.
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