Friday, 26 February 2016
The Legend Of Paikea Retelling
My Reflection
I was learning to retell a legend in a new way. I decided to retell it from Ruatapu's point of view. I found this tricky because it was difficult to translate the story into my own words. This version was different from the draft because I wanted it to be more from Ruatapu's point of view, not just a story that gave him a little bit of slack. My next step is to retell a story from another culture, not Maori.
Friday, 19 February 2016
First day of school description
My Reflection
I was learning to use my senses to add detail to my writing. I found this difficultish (That's a word now) because I had to do it twice AND I had to remember to skip lines in the draft. My next step is to take a better picture (Curse you Chromebook camera!).
Monday, 1 February 2016
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