Friday 23 May 2014

My special place



My reflection
I was learning to add detail to my writing using my five senses.  One thing that worked well for me was being  in my special place to get ideas.  One thing that I could do better next time is the image. Overall I think it was pretty good.

1 comment:

Mrs Hodge said...

I certainly enjoyed reading your description... and had a chuckle or two. You certainly have a way with language, Calvin. Come share our R13 anytime!